To Be<\/em> Verbs<\/h2>\n\n\nIt is virtually impossible to write without using to be<\/em> verbs. However, most people overuse these verbs,\u00a0 and the result is lackluster prose. The problem is, to be<\/em> verbs just do not convey the same dynamism as stronger, more exciting verbs. If you want to energize your writing, try these techniques:<\/p>\n1. Replace the to be<\/em> verb with a more expressive verb:<\/strong><\/div>\nEx. The coach
is<\/strong> loud during games.<\/div>\nVs. The coach
shouts<\/strong> during games.<\/div>\nEx. The caf\u00e9\u2019s sandwiches
are<\/strong> excellent.<\/div>\nVs. The caf\u00e9
serves<\/strong> excellent sandwiches.<\/div>\nEx. The student
is<\/strong> afraid of failing the test.<\/div>\nVs. The student fears<\/strong> failing the test.<\/p>\n2. Change a noun into a verb:<\/strong><\/div>\nEx. Our uncle
is<\/strong> the driver<\/strong> of the bus.<\/div>\nVs. Our uncle drives<\/strong> the bus.<\/p>\n3. Combine short, choppy sentences:<\/strong><\/div>\nEx. The band\u2019s music
is<\/strong> excellent. The lyrics are<\/strong> meaningful. The melodies are<\/strong> catchy.<\/div>\nThe percussion
is<\/strong> energetic.<\/div>\nVs. The band plays<\/strong> excellent music, with meaningful lyrics, catchy melodies, and energetic percussion.<\/p>\n4. Do not overuse there is<\/em>, there are, there were, this is, that are,<\/em> etc.:<\/strong><\/div>\nEx.
There are<\/strong> many apartments that are<\/strong> empty and need new tenants.<\/div>\nVs. Many empty apartments need<\/strong> new tenants.<\/p>\n5. Replace a to be verb + a prepositional phrase with a strong verb:<\/strong><\/div>\nEx. Social media
is<\/strong> influential for millennials.<\/div>\nVs. Social media influences<\/strong> millennials.<\/p>\n6. Replace a to be verb + an \u2013ing<\/em> word with a simple verb:<\/strong><\/div>\nEx. The cat
was scratching<\/strong> at the back door.<\/div>\nVs. The cat
scratched<\/strong> at the back door.<\/div>\nEx. The dragonfly
was hovering<\/strong> over the pond.<\/div>\nVs. The dragonfly hovered<\/strong> over the pond<\/p>\n\n\nStep 2: Avoid Adverbs<\/h2>\n\n\n
In his book, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft<\/em>, Stephen King exclaims, \u201cI believe the road to hell is paved with adverbs, and I will shout it from the rooftops.\u201d He makes an excellent point. Rather than using a verb + adverb combination<\/strong>, it is better to use a verb that is strong enough to stand on its own. <\/p>\nEx. He
went quickly<\/strong> to the store.<\/div>\nVs. He
hurried<\/strong> to the store.<\/div>\nEx. She
looked angrily<\/strong> at her friend.<\/div>\nVs. She
glared<\/strong> at her friend.<\/div>\nEx. He
messily wrote<\/strong> his name at the bottom of the contract.<\/div>\nVs. He scrawled<\/strong> his name at the bottom of the contract.<\/p>\n\n\nStep 3: Get Creative with Verbs<\/h2>\n\n\n
Still trying to think of better verbs? Here are four common verbs with stronger alternatives:<\/p>\n
\u2022 Said:<\/strong> announced, uttered, suggested, stuttered, argued, bellowed, whispered
\u2022 Looked:<\/strong> surveyed, gazed, stared, glanced, squinted, leered
\u2022 Walked:<\/strong> sauntered, strolled, traipsed, tramped, marched, hiked, ambled, plodded
\u2022 Went:<\/strong> fled, passed, moseyed, left, set off, withdrew, took flight, set off<\/p>\n\n\n